Editing and Revising The Trinity Universe 1

I was writing up a series outline for the Trinity Universe.  Making notes of any important events or items during each chapter.  When a character is introduced.  When Jason gave his lovers rings.  That sort of thing. As I went along, however, I grew annoyed.  There are too many chapters that are what I call, “Throwaways”.  They’re pointless and IMO, need to be deleted.  Nothing special or significant happens in them.  I’ve gotten kudos on these chapters, so I won’t be deleting them on AO3. BUT. If I put the universe on my website, it’ll be a revised version of it.  Visits stays the same.  The entirety is character building.  Trinity 1, 2, 3, 4, and 5 are also the same, although chapters 3 and 4 need to be rewritten (doing that now) and a lot of the nonsensical sex play removed.  It makes no sense to me.  It’s written as it is because I simply wanted a bunch of fanfic porn for my boyz. So here’s a list of what would change: The throwaway chapters get deleted. Trinity’s Latin numbering system will be replaced with standard numbers. Multi-chapter stories would be consolidated into one long chapter with section links at the top to indicate what’s in the chapter. And here’s the Outline of the universe, with note summaries.  Where it says REWRITE, it sometimes just means it needs a good edit. ***************** Start:  July 2002.  Season 5, just after Last Stand, with that timeline altered.  They didn’t help the Tok’ra move until Trinity III. Visits 1 – Jason introduces himself; has sister, Lysa (Lisa). Visits 2 – Daniel/Jason go to dinner at Chinese restaurant and Jack sees them. Visits 3 – Jack comes by to see Daniel, makes him mad. Daniel tells him he has to earn trust back. […]

New Font Glyphs

I thought, “What would the glyphs look like if they had been made like the Stargate Atlantis glyphs?” So, I made them.  Used Photoshop and Calligraphr.com. You’ll find them on the Font page.  They’re free to use for any reason and you don’t have to ask.  Don’t claim authorship.  Don’t sell them.  The originals belong to MGM and if you try to make money off a copyright that isn’t yours, understand that they can actually come after you.

New Fic Series (completed): Voyeur

Voyeur Index page AO3 Index HERE A billion years ago (2001), I wrote a 4-part SMUT series called Voyeur.  It really wasn’t thought out well.  I’ve returned to it, fleshed it out (pun intended), and turned it into a 10-part series. This is about Daniel’s sex life, his voyeurism kink, and how it morphs into exhibitionism because he indulges Jack O’Neill.  They go through some trials but they come out the other end whole. Premise:  Daniel discovers that the Security office has been running a sex club where the VIP rooms are used to put on shows for voyeurs and exhibitionists.  All participants wear masks.  Through the voyeurism, he has sex with a few different men, but most often with Dave Coburn, leader of SG-2 and temporary head of the Security office, and Jack O’Neill.  He’ll end up with Jack. IF YOU DON’T LIKE DANIEL WITH ANYONE BUT JACK, YOU WILL HAVE TO SKIP THIS SERIES.

New Series: Voyeur

For now, only the Prologue will be posted.  I will post the ten chapters when they are all completed.  Right now, I’m on Voyeur 7. (none are betaed at this time)   Introducing Voyeur.   A long time ago, I wrote a 4-chapter series called Voyeur.  Daniel had a voyeurism kink, and it morphed into a few other kinks when he got involved with Jack. It didn’t go where I wanted it to go.  I was influenced by the opinions of others.  This time, I’ve rewritten the series and I’ve taken it in the direction I wanted it to go.  It’s EXTREME characterization of the standard canon personalities is *on purpose*.  I’ve deliberately strayed from established character points that we slash fans are familiar with.  The base personalities are the same.  For example, Daniel still prefers words to guns.  Jack is still the protector of everyone.  But what’s different is their sexual personalities.  They’ve never been explored beyond the basic “I’m gay” or “I’m bi”. “Extreme” means that the characters don’t stick to standard “expected” roles and views.  They’re not monogamous.  They’re not vanilla.  They’re not “in love”.  They’re professionals, but they have their vices and their active sexual interests–if they have the time to indulge, they will. So, here is the gist of the series, as seen on the Voyeur index page:   WARNING: Extreme Fantasy AU.  This means that I’ve taken liberty with established canon personalities and turned them sideways.  This applies to everyone, not just Jack and Daniel. WARNING #2:  If you don’t like seeing Jack or Daniel with anyone other than Jack or Daniel, skip this series. Category:  SMUT; Gay, with implied Hetero (not involving J/D). Viewpoint:  Daniel (3rd person, not 1st) Pairing:  Multiples including Daniel, Jack, and others.  Teal’c is not one of them.  I […]

New Fic – Intervals Betwixt 5: Jack Rising

Intervals Betwixt 5: Jack Rising (AO3 Link) Post-Rising Notes: Takes place just after 8’s New Order (real life series premiere was between New Order part 2 and Lockdown) — Once the story transfers to Atlantis (after 20 min or so), so begins the post-episode fic. Pages/Words: 14/6599 Pairing: J/D Rating: M Summary: Jack is floored that Daniel’s curiosity about the Ancients overrode any desire to stay with him. It’s a repeat of Heliopolis and he’s extremely mad.

New Fic: Pulling Threads 1

Pulling Threads (AO3 Link) Summary:  Daniel’s place in the world seems to be going nowhere.  After what happened with The Others, sending him back, he’s got some thinking to do about what happens next.  Does he go to Atlantis, forget about Earth?  Or stay at the SGC in a role he’s not entirely sure is his.  Then Jack invites him to dinner and his future is changed forever. Note:  Post-Threads.  This is an AU that assumes the series ended after this episode.